Essay is about how the writer has learned about his strengths (empathy), refined his ability to be more empathetic Essay

Essay is about how the writer has learned about his strengths (empathy), refined his ability to be more empathetic and learned how to celebrate or appreciate the small things (especially when working towards a significant, long-term goal). Essay length is limited to 650 words.

Would like help to ensure that the components are well organized to support those 2 key points. Also, would like to ensure that the opening and closing statements are interesting to grab the reader.