Attached is a copy of your assignment with comments. Please make the edits indicated and return the assignment to

Attached is a copy of your assignment with comments. Please make the edits indicated and return the assignment to me. You will get credit for completing this assignment once it meets the requirements for the class – refer to the assignment 3 rubric posted in the course Blackboard for details. Please submit it to me before the deadline, Saturday, October 22nd.

General comments:

Sections of the paper:
The paper should be divided into three sections: (1) Abstract, (2) Introduction, and (3) Method. Your paper does not label these three sections. Also, a methods section is missing from this paper.

Citations:
You mention two papers on the first paragraph. At least three papers need to be synthesized in the paper. All papers you mention need to include citation of the authors and years. The second paper you mentioned in the first paragraph does not appear in the references – therefore, it is not clear what paper this is.

You cite a few articles that do not appear on the references – e.g., Liao et al, 2020; Tan et al, 2020. Make sure all cited articles appear on the references.

The second article you describe in the paper seems to be based on the token economy article mentioned in the references; however, it doesn’t seem to be related to the second article mentioned in the first paragraph of the paper. Make sure the article and information is clear – e.g., either the first paragraph does not mention the correct article, or the first paragraph doesn’t mention an article that is included in the references.

Your last paragraph mentions a third article, which meets the number of articles needed for this assignment; but, your first paragraph only mentions two. Make sure the first paragraph is consistent with the information presented in the paper.

Attached is a copy of your assignment with comments. Please make the edits indicated and return the assignment to me. You will get credit for completing this assignment once it meets the requirements for the class – refer to the assignment 3 rubric posted in the course Blackboard for details. Please submit it to me before the deadline, Saturday, October 22nd.

General comments:

Sections of the paper:
The paper should be divided into three sections: (1) Abstract, (2) Introduction, and (3) Method. Your paper does not label these three sections. Also, a methods section is missing from this paper.

Citations:
You mention two papers on the first paragraph. At least three papers need to be synthesized in the paper. All papers you mention need to include citation of the authors and years. The second paper you mentioned in the first paragraph does not appear in the references – therefore, it is not clear what paper this is.

You cite a few articles that do not appear on the references – e.g., Liao et al, 2020; Tan et al, 2020. Make sure all cited articles appear on the references.

The second article you describe in the paper seems to be based on the token economy article mentioned in the references; however, it doesn’t seem to be related to the second article mentioned in the first paragraph of the paper. Make sure the article and information is clear – e.g., either the first paragraph does not mention the correct article, or the first paragraph doesn’t mention an article that is included in the references.

Your last paragraph mentions a third article, which meets the number of articles needed for this assignment; but, your first paragraph only mentions two. Make sure the first paragraph is consistent with the information presented in the paper.

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