Specific: Good title page but it should be in apa style by this point. Delete the running head and bold your title.Good abstract but it should be 1 paragraph and the only thing on page 2. The body of the paper starts on page 3.Good use of headings!Edit down paragraphs to 4-5 sentences each. Really work on focusing them.This is the same paper that you turned in before-each time you submit a paper there should at least some changes to things that you did to improve your paper (paragraphs, word choices, more organization). Please do not simply turn in the same paper, but revise and edit it to make it better each time.Reference page: This is not in apa style due to your use of italics. If you fix that, it will be good.